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ET PT-1

LJ is a talented but broke photographer in Baltimore who is desperate for a big break. He signs up with a mysterious firm, "Supernatural Success," run by the enigmatic Drac, which offers him lucrative but bizarre and dangerous jobs. His first assignment involves filming a manor owned by a polite vegan zombie, which quickly escalates to his next job: an off-world corporate shoot for an alien CEO aboard a starship. LJ must navigate these surreal and perilous situations, using his wit and camera skills to survive and, hopefully, get rich.

(Cell phone doom scrolling) one lady - ( alien invasion are happening everywhere and no one is talking about it) one guy ( I wouldn’t mine dating a alien) another person- ( which alien movie is your best movie? Mine is ) . LJ - ( throws his phone down lays back on the bed) man when is Drac going to call it been a week. I still have money but I need to stack more. Hopefully the next job isn’t that dangerous. ( LJ phone rang he picks it up) LJ- hello , who is this? Drac- hey LJ this is Drac. LJ- about time !!! What happened to the original phone number? Drac- we have to scramble our phone numbers from time to time . Clients confidentiality , if you haven’t picked up our clients aren’t normal. That’s why the pay is extremely high. LJ- I kinda figured that. Drac- is that a problem? LJ- ummm naw if the pay is good I’m willing to take pictures of a lion while being in the cage with him. Drac- that’s good to hear, So about that we have another job for you. It will pay twice as much. LJ- hold up twice as much!!! What’s the catch? Drac- you’ll be beamed out of space onto a spaceship with aliens. LJ- oh naw that beyond trippy, give me a second to just comprehend what you’re saying. Drac- yes out of space LJ- outer space like et, like Star Wars. Drac- yes LJ like Star Trek. They have a new product that they are launching into the universe but they need product shots and professional reels. Can you do it? LJ- yes I can but how am I supposed to get to space and back home. Breathe in that atmosphere before dying? Drac- we will supply you with the hakhol necklace. This necklace is very powerful you will have the ability to teleport to and from a destination of our choice, breath in outer space, water, fire etc for 24 hours. Just to name a few things. give a elaborate orgin story of the hakhol a pieace that was found in Africa in the 1300 ac

Urban Fantasy/Sci-FiMangaEnglish7 pages
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CHARACTERS

Mysterious Man

antagonist

A tall, extremely thin, skeletal figure with unnaturally long, spindly fingers. He wears a dark, old-fashioned suit that hangs off his bony frame. do not show face keeps a mystery

Reed

supporting

A 'post-life restorative' who looks like a zombie. He wears a tattered, old-fashioned suit smelling of formaldehyde. His skin is grey and peeling like parchment, his jaw is slightly detached, and one eye is a milky white. Despite his decaying appearance, his movements are deliberate.

Drac

supporting

Drac is never seen in person, only heard as a smooth, disembodied voice. Visually, he can be represented as a shadowy figure in a sharp suit, seen only in reflections or on flickering monitor screens, his face always obscured in darkness or digital static. His presence is felt, not seen.

LJ

protagonist

A young African-American man in his mid-20s with a lean build. He has short dreadlocks and expressive, often wide eyes. He dresses in practical, modern streetwear appropriate for Baltimore: hoodies, graphic tees, worn jeans, and sneakers, usually with a well-loved camera bag slung over his shoulder.

Eric Thomas

supporting

A very tall, like 7'10 elegant alien CEO with elongated limbs and a slender frame. His skin shimmers with an iridescent, oil-on-water quality. He wears a perfectly tailored suit that appears to be woven from solidified light, which subtly glows. His features are refined and non-human.

Intercom

minor

A sleek, wall-mounted mechanical intercom speaker designed in a clean, minimalist manga sci-fi style. The unit features a circular metallic housing with a dark, fine-mesh speaker grille at its center. Faint, soft-blue concentric light rings pulse outwards from the center of the device to visually represent sound waves and active transmission. The casing is made of brushed aluminum with subtle, futuristic panel lines, seamlessly integrated into a smooth, light-colored wall.

PAGE 1

Panel 1:A vast, golden-hued savanna stretches endlessly under a blood-orange sunset. Massive baobab trees stand sentinel. In the foreground, a hidden valley reveals itself beneath ancient rock formations—a place untouched by time. A lone figure stands atop a rocky outcrop, gazing down at the valley below. The sky crackles with an otherworldly energy; faint auroras shimmer despite the daylight, suggesting something unnatural about this place.

Narrator:“Thirteen hundred years before the present. In the heart of Africa, where the veil between worlds grows thin.”

Panel 2:Deep beneath the earth, hidden within an ancient stone temple, a vast circular chamber is revealed. The walls are carved with intricate geometric patterns—mathematical, precise, utterly inhuman in their perfection. At the chamber's center sits a raised stone altar. Hovering above it, suspended in mid-air and glowing with ethereal light, is the Hakhol: a magnificent necklace of crystalline material that shimmers with colors that don't exist in nature—hues between silver and violet, pulsing with inner radiance. The artifact's surface catches light in impossible ways.

Narrator:“A gift. An anchor. Left behind by those who walked between the stars.”

Panel 3:An intimate close-up of the Hakhol necklace suspended in the air. Its surface is impossibly smooth yet intricate—carved with symbols and mathematical formulas that seem to shift and change when not looked at directly. The light radiating from it casts ethereal shadows across the stone altar below. Energy pulses through the artifact in subtle waves, as if it's alive—conscious—waiting.

Narrator:“Crafted from materials no earthly forge could produce. Imbued with power beyond comprehension.”

Panel 4:A group of African warriors, scholars, and priests stand in awe before the illuminated chamber. Their faces are filled with reverence and wonder. The eldest figure—a tall woman adorned with ritual scarification and gold jewelry—steps forward toward the altar. Her hand reaches toward the hovering Hakhol, bathed in its ethereal glow. Behind her, younger initiates hold torches that seem dim and weak compared to the artifact's radiance.

Narrator:“The keepers of the sacred site understood: this treasure was not meant for possession. It was a test. A responsibility. A bridge.”

Panel 5:A sweeping visual montage showing the Hakhol passing through generations. Panels showing: the necklace being carefully wrapped in ritual cloth by priests; centuries passing as the temple is hidden deeper; the artifact being passed from guardian to guardian across centuries; finally, the temple being lost to history—overgrown, forgotten, buried. Each image shows the Hakhol's glow dimming as human knowledge of it fades, suggesting its power waiting to be rediscovered.

Narrator:“Protected. Hidden. Waiting. For the day when one brave enough—or desperate enough—would be chosen to reclaim it.”

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