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CLUB NOCHE

Issue 3 part 1 fight

In Club Noche's underground fight arena, Creed Rivers faces two seasoned enforcers in a brutal combat test. Shirtless and composed, Creed methodically dismantles both opponents through superior technique—dodging strikes, landing crushing elbows, executing a German suplex, fracturing one enforcer's knee with a side kick, and locking in an armbar that he converts to a triangle choke, rendering his opponent unconscious. From the balcony above, Joker watches with intrigue, impressed by Creed's military precision and lethal efficiency. Beside him, Slik observes in cold silence, his arms crossed, sensing something dangerous in this stranger. As the defeated men lie broken on the canvas, Joker offers Creed a choice: return to fight, or work for the organization. Creed declines to answer immediately, stepping back into the crowd. Above, Slik's expression flickers with recognition—a predator acknowledging another predator—as Creed disappears into the darkness, leaving two wrecked men and a silent monster watching from above.

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▸ CAST

CHARACTERS

Karina

Supporting

Cody Rivers

Protagonist

Frank

Antagonist

Aline Fonseca

Supporting

Alina

Supporting

More realistic art style

Security guy

Minor

Club noche enforcer

Minor

N'Alan

Minor

Abdullah

Minor

Austin

Minor

Creed Rivers

Protagonist

Ramirez

supporting

A sociopathic, affluent crime figure in his late thirties with slicked-back dark brown hair and sharp, mocking brown eyes. He has an olive complexion spattered with fresh blood, a cruel smirk, and prominent cheekbones. He wears a torn, bloodstained designer off-white silk dress shirt, charcoal tailored trousers, and an expensive gold wrist watch.

Joker

Supporting

JP

supporting

A nervous nightclub underling caught in over his head. In his late twenties with a pale, sweat-sheened complexion, anxious wide dark hazel eyes, and disheveled short black hair. He wears a rumpled black collared work shirt with rolled-up sleeves, dark slacks, and a loosened thin tie. His posture is rigid with terror and his hands visibly tremble.

Kaleen

Supporting

Officer Matt Steel

minor

Chief

supporting

A seasoned, politically shrewd police official in his late fifties with slicked-back graying dark hair and tired, deeply recessed dark eyes under heavy brows. He has a sturdy, broad-shouldered build and a weathered, sharp-featured face etched with lines of cynicism. He dresses in a high-grade charcoal police service dress shirt with a loosened dark silk tie, rolled-up sleeves showing forearm hair, and a gleaming gold watch and signet ring on his desk-resting hands.

Officer Vargas

supporting

A rigid, disciplined officer in his mid-to-late thirties with a crisp military fade, intense dark brown eyes, and an angular jawline. He possesses an athletic, imposing frame and maintains an impassive, locked-in posture with crossed arms. He wears a spotless, pressed black-and-blue tactical armor with a police emblem

Steph

Minor

Second enforcer

Minor

First enforcer

Minor

Momma Noche

Antagonist

Henchmen 1

Minor

Ann

Minor

Should have flat chest no breast

Slik

Protagonist

Samsung

Supporting

And half his face is robot as well

Money holder

Minor

PAGE 1

Panel 1:The 2 enforcers stand across the ring from creed. A 3 way stand down. Creed is shirtless wearing only black pants and wrist wraps.

Narrator:2 club noche fighters, not showmen. They fight for money, for survival

Panel 2:A view of the balcony overlooking the arena. Joker stands at the railing, leaning forward slightly, his expression one of genuine interest. Beside him, Slik leans against the railing with his arms crossed over his chest. His face is unreadable, his dark eyes locked downward on Creed in the ring below. No smile. No reaction. Just observation.

Panel 3:Close-up of the referee's hand holding a small bell. The bell is struck sharply. The image captures the moment of impact, the clapper moving forward.

Narrator:The bell rings.

Panel 4:The two enforcers circle Creed from opposite sides, moving with practiced caution. One enforcer feints high with his right hand while the other drops low, driving forward with a takedown attempt. Creed's upper body shifts back, dodging the high punch cleanly. His hips drop and his legs sprawl backward, his hands pressing down on the mat as the second enforcer's arms wrap around empty air. Creed pivots smoothly, using the momentum to rotate around the man's body. Creed is shirtless wearing only black pants and wrist wraps.

Narrator:The fight begins and both men immediately rush Creed, forcing him to defend and evade.

Panel 5:Creed throws a hard lateral elbow right to the first enforcers jaw snapping his head back. Creed is shirtless wearing only black pants and wrist wraps.

Narrator:Creed manages to get a blow in

Panel 6:Creed lands a double foot drop kick on the second enforcer. Creed is shirtless wearing only black pants and wrist wraps.

Second enforcer : Ahhhhh!

Panel 7:The first enforcer is on his feet again, shaking off the suplex. He rushes Creed and forces him back into the corner turnbuckle. Both enforcers swarm, raining down a barrage of punches—left, right, left, right—their fists coming from both sides. Creed keeps his hands high, elbows tucked, his chin down, absorbing the blows on his forearms and shoulders. His face is impassive. He is not trying to escape—he is waiting, reading the rhythm of their assault. Creed is shirtless wearing only black pants and wrist wraps.

PAGE 2

Panel 1:Creed's body tenses. In one explosive moment, creed lunges upward with a hard uppercut to the second enforcer. His fist travels in a tight vertical line, catching the second enforcer on the chin. The enforcer's head snaps back, his body lifting off the ground, and he crashes backward onto the canvas. The first enforcer continues his assault, but Creed is already moving. Creed is shirtless wearing only black pants and wrist wraps.

Panel 2:Creed picks up the first enforcer and carries him before slamming him down.

Narrator:Suplex city!

Panel 3:The second enforcer gets back to his feet despite his shattered knee. He limps toward Creed, his leg buckling with each step, and screams in rage and pain. His fists are raised, but his stance is compromised. He charges anyway.

Second enforcer : ARGHHH!

Panel 4:Creed stands his ground. As the second enforcer lunges forward, Creed throws an upward soccer style kick to the groin region of the second enforcer.

Narrator:One down…one to go

Panel 5:The first enforcer slams creed to the ground with a takedown. Creed is shirtless wearing only black pants and wrist wraps.

Narrator:The remaining fighter takes down Creed!

Panel 6:Creed is able to lock in a triangle choke Jiu jitsu submission and the first enforcer passes out. Creed is shirtless wearing only black pants and wrist wraps.

Narrator:Out of desperation, Creed locks in a triangle choke hold! Eventually the fighter passes out

PAGE 3

Panel 1:Creed releases the choke and stands. Both enforcers are down. One is coughing blood, his body curled on the mat. The other lies still, his arm hanging at an odd angle. The canvas around them is marked with their impact. Creed stands in the center of the ring, breathing steadily, his bare chest rising and falling. No exhaustion on his face. No celebration. Just stillness. Creed is shirtless wearing only black pants and wrist wraps.

Narrator:The crowd now screams for Creed.

Panel 2:From the balcony, Joker leans forward and grabs a microphone. His expression is one of genuine interest and amusement. He brings the mic to his mouth. Do not show creed in this panel.

Joker: That's enough.

Panel 3:Creed's head tilts up toward the balcony. His eyes meet Joker's. He nods once and releases his grip on the unconscious enforcer. The crowd noise rises—mixed cheers, shocked murmurs, whistles. Some spectators clap. Others stare in silence, processing what they have witnessed. Creed steps back, creating distance from the broken men on the canvas. Creed is shirtless wearing only black pants and wrist wraps.

Panel 4:Joker stands at the railing, the microphone still in his hand. His face shows genuine respect and intrigue. He smiles—not a cruel smile, but one of recognition. Behind him, Slik remains motionless, his arms still crossed, his eyes still locked on Creed. But something has changed in Slik's expression. For the first time, there is a flicker of recognition across his face—not respect, not approval, but acknowledgment. The look of one predator recognizing another. Creed is shirtless wearing only black pants and wrist wraps.

Joker: Not bad. You move like a soldier. But you hit like something else.

Narrator:He studies Creed for a moment.

Panel 5:Joker leans against the railing, the microphone at his side. His expression is calculating but open. He gestures slightly with his free hand as he speaks.

Joker: Come back. Fight again. Or don't fight. Work for us. Men like you always find a place here.

Panel 6:Creed stands in the ring, his body still glistening with sweat under the harsh lights. His face is composed, unreadable. He looks up at Joker, his jaw tightening slightly. He does not answer immediately. The silence stretches. The crowd noise has faded to a low murmur, waiting for his response. Creed is shirtless wearing only black pants and wrist wraps.

PAGE 4

Panel 1:Creed's mouth opens. His voice is steady, controlled. Creed is shirtless here but it’s an up close view of him focusing on his face. He does not have tattoos

Creed Rivers: I'll think about it.

Panel 2:Joker's expression shifts into an amused smile. He chuckles—a low, satisfied sound. He nods appreciatively.

Joker: Good. I like men who think.

Panel 3:Creed turns and walks toward the edge of the ring. He steps through the ropes and drops to the floor. The crowd parts slightly as he moves through them, shirtless and bleeding from small cuts on his face and torso. He does not acknowledge the spectators. His eyes are forward, focused. He disappears into the darkness beyond the arena lights, swallowed by the crowd and the shadows of the club.

Narrator:Creed leaves the ring. Leaving two broken men, a curious king, and a silent monster watching from above.

Panel 4:Back on the balcony, Joker watches Creed disappear with a satisfied expression. Beside him, Slik remains motionless. His arms are still crossed, but his head has turned slightly, tracking Creed's movement through the crowd. His face is still unreadable, but his eyes—dark and cold—hold something new: recognition. Not warmth. Not admiration. Just the cold acknowledgment of a dangerous thing seeing another dangerous thing.

Narrator:A collision feeling more inevitable than ever…

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