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▸ DAUGHTERS OF WAR GRAPHIC NOVEL FULL

The Weight of Command

In 1955 Dahomey, an elderly woman named Sika recounts her life story to her grandchildren, revealing her past as one of the famed Agojie warriors. The narrative flashes back to the late 19th century, following a young Sika and her friends, Kemi and Afi, as they are conscripted and forged into elite soldiers. They are plunged into the brutal reality of the Franco-Dahomean wars, facing a technologically superior French army that includes the formidable Foreign Legion. Through devastating battles and profound personal loss, Sika witnesses the fall of her kingdom but survives to carry its true history, finally passing the story to a new generation and reclaiming their heritage from the colonial narrative.

At Atchoukpa, King Béhanzin's army attacks the French square formation, but disciplined rifle fire and cannon devastate the Dahomean regiments in brutal contrast to their victory over Toffa's warriors. When Dòkpè is killed by a rifle shot through the head, Kemi seizes command and orchestrates a fighting withdrawal, saving her musketeers but forced to leave Dòkpè's body behind on the slope. After the treaty is signed in Ouidah and a feast honors the fallen, Sika finds Kemi alone and weeping, tormented by doubt—did she truly need to abandon Dòkpè, and will her decisions cost more lives in the battles yet to come? As the three girls restore their sleeping mats beside one another and the compound settles into an uneasy peace, the final words echo with dread: only now do they understand what they have been preparing for.

Historical FictionAmerican ComicsEnglish12 pages
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CHARACTERS

Legionnaire

protagonist

Nema

supporting

A young Dahomean woman in her late teens to early twenties, serving as an Agojie warrior. She has dark brown skin, short natural hair, and sharp, alert eyes reflecting focus and determination. Nema wears the distinctive uniform of the Agojie: a wrapped cloth skirt in indigo and earth tones secured at the waist, a fitted sleeveless tunic or chest wrap in natural linen, and leather arm cuffs. She carries a musket and wears a leather belt with a sheathed machete. Her build is lean and athletic, honed by rigorous warrior training. She bears minor scars on her forearms from past combat. During the retreat sequence, she moves with urgency and purpose, her posture commanding as she directs other warriors toward safety, showing both physical strength and natural leadership despite her youth.

Fatu

protagonist

Mother of te Children, elegant , educated slim and motherly

French marine

protagonist

Sika

protagonist

As a young West African woman in the 1890s, Sika is tall and long-legged with a lean, developing warrior's build, dark skin, and tightly coiled black hair. She wears the simple cotton wrapper or tunic of an Agojie recruit, often armed with a musket and a short sword. As 'Nana Sika' in 1955, she is an elderly, tall woman, slightly stooped by age, with short, silver-threaded hair, dark, clear eyes, and fine ceremonial marks on her lined cheeks. She wears a faded indigo wrapper and has a distinctive pale scar circling her left wrist.

Dòkpè

supporting

A Dahomean woman in her forties during the 1890s. She is a veteran Agojie officer, lean and hard-muscled. Her face is defined by multiple scars, including one deep scar from her left ear to her jaw that pulls her mouth into a perpetual, grim smile. She wears faded, practical training clothes and carries herself with an air of absolute authority.

Sena

supporting

A senior Agojie officer in the 1890s, older than Dòkpè. She is a West African woman with a narrow, sinewy face and greying hair cut close to her head. A veteran scout, she is alert and moves with quiet purpose, armed with a short musket and a long knife.

King Béhanzin

supporting

The last king of Dahomey in the 1890s. A tall, powerfully built West African man with a broad face and a carefully shaped beard. He is depicted in royal attire: a white cloth draped over one shoulder, leaving the other bare, with heavy necklaces of coral and polished beads on his chest.

Sister Adeline

supporting

A French nun in 1955 Dahomey. She has a long, pale European face, often pink from the heat. She wears a spotless, traditional white Catholic nun's habit and a starched wimple that frames her face.

Houéfa

supporting

A 12-year-old West African girl in 1955. She has dark skin and her hair is in tight braids. She wears a simple blue cotton school dress. Her expression is often grave and watchful.

Dossi

supporting

A 10-year-old West African girl in 1955. She is fine-boned with bright eyes and a round, expressive face. She wears simple clothing appropriate for a schoolgirl in her village.

Gbodja

supporting

An 8-year-old West African boy in 1955. He is thin and reedy, with dusty knees and a closely cropped head. He wears simple shorts and a shirt, often untucked, reflecting his restless energy.

Kemi

supporting

A young West African woman of the 1890s, Kemi is of average height with a compact, controlled, and athletic build. She has dark skin and hair tied firmly away from her face. She is practical and efficient in her movements, wearing the simple uniform of an Agojie warrior and carrying a musket and blade.

Afi

supporting

A young West African woman of the 1890s, Afi is shorter than her friends but powerfully built, with thick shoulders, hips, and muscular legs. She has dark skin and an intense, often defiant expression. She wears the Agojie uniform and carries her weapons with an aggressive readiness, preferring her sword.

Nawi

supporting

The high commander of the Agojie in the 1890s, a woman approaching fifty. Shorter than Dòkpè but with a body thickened by age and battle, not soft. Her West African face bears fine ritual marks and a broad scar from her temple to her nose. Two fingers on her left hand are permanently damaged. She wears a clean indigo tunic decorated with cowrie shells and a short blade at her waist.

Nana Sika

protagonist

PAGE 1

Panel 1:Wide aerial view of a jungle road at dawn. The Dahomean army stretches back through the trees in dense columns — male warriors and Agojie companies moving forward in disciplined lines. Banners and musket barrels catch the early light above a canopy of oil palms. Ahead, the road opens onto broken, hilly ground. King Béhanzin's royal parasol is visible far back in the column, a wide circle of bright cloth above the crowd.

Narrator:“Atchoukpa. 20 April 1890.”

Panel 2:Medium shot on Sika, Kemi, and Afi marching side by side, muskets at their shoulders. Sika stares ahead with focused eyes. Kemi's jaw is set and her hair tied firmly back. Afi wipes sweat from her face with the back of her wrist, her expression restless and hungry for the fight ahead.

“Afi: No ships this time. Kemi: No walls either. For them or for us.”

Panel 3:Close-up on Dòkpè's face in three-quarter profile. Her deep scar pulls the left corner of her mouth into its permanent grim set. Her eyes are fixed forward, steady and hard. Powder burns mark her forearm from Cotonou. She carries her musket across her chest.

“Dòkpè: When Toffa's men break — do not chase them. The French want time to form their square.”

Panel 4:Over-shoulder shot from behind Dòkpè looking down a slope where the jungle opens. Below, a wide broken road cuts through low hills. In the distance, the shapes of men — Toffa's warriors — are visible in loose formation across the route. Smoke from cooking fires drifts above them.

“Sika: What formation? Dòkpè: A square. Rifles facing every direction. Cannon at the corners.”

Panel 5:Wide panel. The Agojie musketeers spread out among trees, boulders, and folds in the hillside. Each woman crouches or kneels, checking her flint and cartridge pouch. Kemi pushes her ramrod into the barrel and withdraws it. Sika retightens her ammunition pouch. Afi checks the binding on hers, then goes still. The jungle presses close around them.

“Dòkpè: Find cover. Fire only when you have a target. When the enemy runs — you remain with the group.”

PAGE 2

Panel 1:Wide shot of the slope below. Dahomean warriors surge from three directions down through the trees and onto the road where Toffa's warriors are still forming up. Muskets fire in ragged bursts. Smoke spreads across the road. Men collide in confusion, moving forward and backward at once.

Narrator:“The first charge struck Toffa's men before they had completed their formation.”

Panel 2:Dòkpè stands upright on the slope, arm raised, her mouth open in command. Behind her, the Agojie musketeers rise from cover in two lines. Kemi, Sika, and Afi are visible in the line, each snapping to attention.

“Dòkpè: FORM! LOAD! RAM!”

Panel 3:Close-up on Kemi's face pressed against the stock of her musket. Her eye is narrowed behind the sight. Below in the middle distance, a Porto-Novo officer in a red headcloth holds a sword and tries to rally men near the road.

“Dòkpè: PRESENT — FIRE!”

Panel 4:Wide panel. A line of smoke erupts along the hillside as the Agojie volley fires simultaneously. Below, Toffa's warriors buckle. Some men fall. Others drop spears and run. The Porto-Novo officer has vanished from his position near the road.

Panel 5:Medium shot. Afi rises from behind a tree, eyes bright, watching the fleeing Porto-Novo men below. Kemi's hand grabs Afi's shoulder and pulls her down firmly. Sika is already reloading behind the ridge beside them.

“Afi: They are running! Kemi: Stay down.”

Panel 6:Wide shot from above the slope. The Dahomean pursuit rushes down the road after Toffa's broken men, victory cries rising visibly from open mouths. But beyond the fleeing warriors, a new shape is forming — the French square, tirailleurs and marines moving from column into a broad outward-facing formation, officers pushing Toffa's men away from the center. Cannon are being dragged into position at the corners.

“Dòkpè: Where are the French? Kemi: They used Toffa's men to buy time.”

PAGE 3

Panel 1:Wide shot at ground level. The French front rank kneels in a disciplined line. The rear rank stands behind them, rifles aimed over the kneeling men's heads. French officers stand behind with arms raised. The square is compact and bristling, cannon visible at the nearest corner.

Narrator:“The French had learned at Cotonou. They carried their defences with them.”

Panel 2:Splash-width panel. The French volley fires as one — a single tearing wall of smoke and flame along the entire front rank. In the foreground, Dahomean warriors at the head of the pursuit fall together, some mid-stride, some spinning sideways. The sound is depicted by thick bold lines radiating from the smoke wall.

“Dòkpè: DOWN!”

Panel 3:Medium close on Kemi, Sika, and Afi flat behind a low ridge, hands pressed to the earth. Smoke rolls over them. Kemi's eyes are wide but her jaw is locked. Sika's face is pressed sideways against the dirt, watching the smoke. Afi has her wounded arm pressed against her body, her good hand gripping her musket stock.

Panel 4:Wide shot. The French cannon fires from the corner of the square — a burst of grapeshot tears a ragged hole through a cluster of Dahomean warriors on the road. Bodies and dust fly outward. The victory cries of moments ago have become screams.

Panel 5:Medium shot on Dòkpè moving along the Agojie line on the slope, crouching low, her face taut with controlled urgency. She gestures for the musketeers to shift position. Around her, women reload and crawl to new cover. Branches above have been shattered by French rifle fire.

“Dòkpè: Short advances. Fire and move. Keep above them. Find a target. Do not waste powder.”

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