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DELI & BRENTON — YEAR ONE

Deli & Brenton — Year One

Artist Brief + Full Script 1. OVERALL ART DIRECTION Style Semi-realistic illustrated comic style 70% realism / 30% illustration Clean linework + soft painterly shading No exaggerated/cartoon proportions Faces must remain recognisable and grounded in real features Lighting & Color Language Warm tones = connection/intimacy Belgrade Balcony Sheffield All the Rivers Run Final panel Cool tones = distance/formality Early work scenes Video calls Paris = balanced Slightly brighter, airy, natural light Rendering Notes Soft shadows, not harsh contrast Subtle glow on skin in emotional scenes Backgrounds slightly softened (not hyper-detailed) Keep environments clean, modern, intentional 2. CHARACTER DESIGN (CRITICAL) Deli Long dark hair, soft waves Warm medium skin tone Almond-shaped eyes Defined brows (not thin) Full lips Slightly longer face shape (not round) Wears patterned earrings (recurring visual anchor) Brenton Short hair Light stubble Calm, grounded expression Wears muted light pink hoodie Sometimes open black jacket over hoodie Relaxed posture Height & Proportion Brenton slightly taller When slouching, Deli’s forehead aligns around mid-forehead of Brenton 3. PANEL-BY-PANEL SCRIPT Panel 1 — Two Worlds Scene Split screen (vertical divide). Left: Deli in Kraljevo Warm indoor lighting Clean, modern home Laptop open Focused, neutral expression Right: Brenton in Sheffield Cooler lighting Minimal, tidy space Laptop open Calm, professional Emotion Neutral. No connection yet. Caption “Two people. Same team. Different worlds.” Panel 2 — The Work Call Scene Video call grid (Teams/Zoom inspired, simplified UI). 4–6 participants total Others slightly faded/desaturated Deli and Brenton more visually prominent Someone else is speaking (small speech bubble or UI cue) Key detail: Both looking slightly longer than necessary Subtle curiosity—not obvious attraction Emotion Awareness begins. Caption “We started out as colleagues… …but something felt different.” Panel 3 — The Shift Scene Split composition. Left: Chat window Right: Both at laptops, relaxed, slight smiles Chat Text (exact): “I love a chair latte.” “I’ve never tried a chair latte. 🪑☕😂” “You should 😂, and Happy Friday! 🥳” “Happy Friday!! 🎉😊” Emotion Playful. Personal tone emerging. Caption “Friendly. Jovial. But there was more beneath the surface.” Panel 4 — Belgrade Scene Evening setting. Sitting across from each other Warm lighting Wine glasses raised Bottle labeled Invincible Natural, easy connection Emotion Comfort + attraction Caption “Then… Belgrade.” Panel 5 — Balcony (Pre-Kiss) Scene Night balcony overlooking New Belgrade. City lights in background Brenton leaning against wall Deli near table with wine Close proximity Key detail Pause before action. Eye contact. Emotion Tension. Anticipation. Caption “That was the moment.” Panel 6 — The Kiss Scene Same balcony. Leaning in Soft, natural kiss Not exaggerated Emotion Release. Shift into relationship. Caption “That’s where it began.” Panel 7 — Sheffield Scene Laycock Studios (student accommodation feel). Small room Soft indoor lighting KFC on bed or low table Laptop open but ignored Slight mess (bags, wrappers) Body Language Relaxed, close, comfortable Emotion Ease. Real life. No pressure. Caption “No plans. Nowhere to be. Just us.” Panel 8 — Paris (Layered Composition) Top Layer (3 vignettes, from behind) Eiffel Tower — holding hands Louvre — arms around each other Notre Dame — locking arms 👉 Slightly softened, memory-like Middle Layer Walking together in Paris Movement Natural interaction Bottom Layer (main focus) Metro scene Standing, holding pole Metro map above Deli resting head on Brenton’s shoulder Brenton resting head on Deli Emotion Companionship. Quiet intimacy. Caption “From extraordinary places… to ordinary moments— it was always better with you.” Panel 9 — The Fire Scene Hotel hallway filled with smoke Alarm lights Confusion turning serious Moving down stairs together Emotion Real danger. Grounding moment. Caption “It wasn’t just a drill.” Panel 10 — All the Rivers Run Scene In bed together. Laptop open Watching All the Rivers Run Warm lighting Close, relaxed Emotion Reflection. Meaning. Caption “We weren’t just watching a story.” Panel 11 — The Secret Scene Back to work life. Calls, messages Normal on surface Subtle shared looks Emotion Private world within public one Caption “Our little secret… hiding in plain sight.” Panel 12 — Final Scene Together again. Calm, grounded No big moment Just certainty Emotion Stability. Continuation. Caption “One year in… and still writing our story.”

Artist Brief + Full Script 1. OVERALL ART DIRECTION Style Semi-realistic illustrated comic style 70% realism / 30% illustration Clean linework + soft painterly shading No exaggerated/cartoon proportions Faces must remain recognisable and grounded in real features Lighting & Color Language Warm tones = connection/intimacy Belgrade Balcony Sheffield All the Rivers Run Final panel Cool tones = distance/formality Early work scenes Video calls Paris = balanced Slightly brighter, airy, natural light Rendering Notes Soft shadows, not harsh contrast Subtle glow on skin in emotional scenes Backgrounds slightly softened (not hyper-detailed) Keep environments clean, modern, intentional 2. CHARACTER DESIGN (CRITICAL) Deli Long dark brown/black hair, soft waves Warm medium skin tone Almond-shaped eyes Defined brows (not thin) Full lips Slightly longer face shape (not round) Wears patterned earrings (recurring visual anchor) Wears a dark blue dress with white veiny lines like a marbled effect when in apartments or apartment balcony. When outside anywhere else, wears the long brown coat. Brenton Short brown hair Light stubble Calm, grounded expression Wears muted light pink hoodie Sometimes open black jacket over hoodie and a deep pink hat Relaxed posture Height & Proportion Brenton slightly taller Deli’s forehead aligns around mid-forehead of Brenton 3. PANEL-BY-PANEL SCRIPT Panel 1 — Two Worlds Scene Split screen (vertical divide). Left: Deli in Kraljevo Warm indoor lighting Clean, modern home Laptop open Focused, neutral expression Right: Brenton in Sheffield Cooler lighting Minimal, tidy space Laptop open Calm, professional Emotion Neutral. No connection yet. Caption “Two people. Same team. Different worlds.” Panel 2 — The Work Call Scene Video call grid (Teams/Zoom inspired, simplified UI). 4–6 participants total Others slightly faded/desaturated Deli and Brenton more visually prominent Someone else is speaking (small speech bubble or UI cue) Key detail: Both looking slightly longer than necessary Subtle curiosity—not obvious attraction Emotion Awareness begins. Caption “We started out as colleagues… …but something felt different.” Panel 3 — The Shift Scene Split composition. Left: Chat window Right: Both at laptops, relaxed, slight smiles Chat Text (exact): “I love a chair latte.” “I’ve never tried a chair latte. 🪑☕😂” “You should 😂, and Happy Friday! 🥳” “Happy Friday!! 🎉😊” Emotion Playful. Personal tone emerging. Caption “Friendly. Jovial. But there was more beneath the surface.” Panel 4 — Belgrade Scene Evening setting. Sitting across from each other at a small table in an apartment Warm lighting Wine glasses raised Bottle labeled Invincible Natural, easy connection Emotion Comfort + attraction Caption “Then… Belgrade.” Panel 5 — Balcony (Pre-Kiss) Scene Night balcony overlooking New Belgrade. City lights in background Brenton leaning against wall wearing his pink hoody Deli wearing a dark blue dress with white veiny lines like a marbled effect is near table with wine glasses and bottle Close proximity Key detail Pause before action. Eye contact. Emotion Tension. Anticipation. Caption “That was the moment.” Panel 6 — The Kiss Scene Same balcony. Leaning in Soft, natural kiss Not exaggerated Emotion Release. Shift into relationship. Caption “That’s where it began.” Panel 7 — Sheffield Scene Laycock Studios (student accommodation feel). Small room Soft indoor lighting KFC on low table Laptop open but ignored Slight mess (bags, wrappers) Body Language Relaxed, close, comfortable Emotion Ease. Real life. No pressure. Caption “No plans. Nowhere to be. Just us.” Panel 8 — Paris (Layered Composition) Top Layer (3 vignettes, from behind) Eiffel Tower — holding hands Louvre — arms around each other Notre Dame — locking arms 👉 Slightly softened, memory-like Middle Layer Walking together in Paris Movement Natural interaction Bottom Layer (main focus) Metro scene Standing, holding pole Metro map above Deli resting head on Brenton’s shoulder Brenton resting head on Deli Emotion Companionship. Quiet intimacy. Caption “From extraordinary places… to ordinary moments— it was always better with you.” Panel 9 — The Fire Scene Hotel hallway filled with smoke Confusion turning serious Running down stairs together Emotion Real danger. Grounding moment. Caption “It wasn’t just a drill.” Panel 10 — All the Rivers Run Scene In bed together. Laptop open Watching All the Rivers Run Warm lighting Close, relaxed Emotion Reflection. Meaning. Caption “We weren’t just watching a story.” Panel 11 — The Secret Scene Back to work life. Calls, messages Normal on surface Subtle shared looks Emotion Private world within public one Caption “Our little secret… hiding in plain sight.” Panel 12 — Final Scene Together again. Calm, grounded No big moment Just certainty Emotion Stability. Continuation. Caption “One year in… and still writing our story.” COVER Title Deli & Brenton Subtitle Year One The same scene illustration from Panel 5 — Balcony (Pre-Kiss) Scene but without the caption.

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CHARACTERS

Brenton

protagonist

Short dark brown hair (not as dark as Deli's hair) Light stubble Calm, grounded, happy expression Eyes relaxed and happy Wears muted light pink hoodie Sometimes open black jacket over hoodie Relaxed posture

Brenton 2

protagonist

Short dark brown hair Light stubble Calm, grounded, happy expression Eyes relaxed and happy Wears muted light pink hoodie Sometimes open black jacket over hoodie Wears blue jeans Relaxed posture

Deli

protagonist

Long dark hair, soft waves Warm medium skin tone Almond-shaped dark brown eyes Defined brows (not thin) Full lips Slightly longer face shape Wears patterned earrings (recurring visual anchor) Wears a long brown coat or a navy blue dress with white veiny lines like a marbled effect inside

PAGE 1

Panel 1:A vertical split screen. On the left, Deli sits in a clean, modern home in Kraljevo, illuminated by warm indoor lighting. Her laptop is open on a desk, and she has a focused, neutral expression, wearing patterned earrings. On the right, Brenton is in his minimal, tidy space in Sheffield, under cooler lighting. His laptop is also open, and he maintains a calm, professional demeanor. He wears his muted light pink hoodie.

Narrator:Two people. Same team. Different worlds.

Panel 2:A video call grid, styled like Teams or Zoom, with simplified UI. There are 4-6 participants in total; the others are slightly faded and desaturated. Deli, with her long dark hair and patterned earrings, and Brenton, with his short brown hair and light stubble, are more visually prominent. Deli wears a dark blue dress with white veiny lines. Brenton wears his muted light pink hoodie. Someone else is speaking, indicated by a small speech bubble or UI cue. Both Deli and Brenton are looking at the screen, their gaze lingering slightly longer than necessary on each other, a subtle hint of curiosity in their expressions.

Narrator:We started out as colleagues… …but something felt different.

Panel 3:A split composition. On the left, a chat window displays text messages. On the right, Deli and Brenton are both at their laptops, looking relaxed and sharing slight smiles. Deli has her long dark hair, patterned earrings, and is wearing a dark blue dress. Brenton has his short brown hair, light stubble, and is wearing his muted light pink hoodie, with an open black jacket over it.

I love a chair latte.I’ve never tried a chair latte. 🪑☕😂You should 😂, and Happy Friday! 🥳Happy Friday!! 🎉😊

Narrator:Friendly. Jovial. But there was more beneath the surface.

PAGE 2

Panel 1:Use the character and asset references attached. Make them look the same. An intimate evening scene. Deli and Brenton sit across from each other at a small table in an apartment, bathed in warm, inviting lighting. They are raising wine glasses, and a bottle labeled 'Invincible' is on the table. Deli wears her dark blue dress with white veiny lines and patterned earrings. Brenton wears his muted light pink hoodie with an open black jacket. They share a natural, easy connection, smiling warmly. They are facing each other, looking into each other's eyes and smiling.

Narrator:Then… Belgrade.

Panel 2:A night scene on a balcony overlooking the city lights of New Belgrade. Brenton, with his short brown hair and light stubble, leans casually against the wall, wearing his muted light pink hoodie. Deli, in her dark blue dress with white veiny lines and patterned earrings, stands in between Brent and a small table with wine glasses and the 'Invincible' bottle. Deli and Brenton are in close proximity, their eyes locked, a palpable tension in the air as they smile and pause before an action.

Narrator:That was the moment.

Panel 3:The same balcony at night. Brenton is leaning his back on the wall behind him, Deli and Brenton are leaning in, their faces close. They share a soft, natural kiss, not exaggerated but full of gentle emotion. Deli's long dark hair frames her face, and Brenton's short brown hair is visible. Deli wears her dark blue dress, and Brenton his muted light pink hoodie.

Narrator:That’s where it began.

PAGE 3

Panel 1:Inside a small room at Laycock Studios, evoking a student accommodation feel. Soft indoor lighting fills the space. KFC buckets and wrappers are on a table, indicating a recent meal. They are sitting closely next to each other on chairs. Double bed behind them that has already been slept in. A laptop is open but ignored. Deli, with her long dark hair, and Brenton, with his short brown hair, are relaxed, close, and comfortable together. Deli wears a dark blue dress, Brenton his muted light pink hoodie. Shoes are near the door. There are 2 back packs on the floor.

Narrator:No plans. Nowhere to be. Just us.

Panel 2:A layered composition depicting their time in Paris. The top layer consists of three slightly softened, memory-like vignettes seen from behind: Deli and Brenton holding hands in front of the Eiffel Tower, arms around each other at the Louvre, and locking arms near Notre Dame. In the middle layer, they are walking together in Paris, captured in natural movement and interaction, Deli wearing her long brown coat and Brenton his deep pink baseball cap and black jacket. The bottom layer, the main focus, shows them in a metro scene: standing, holding a pole, with a metro map visible above them. Deli rests her head on Brenton’s shoulder, and Brenton rests his head on Deli's, conveying quiet intimacy. Deli wears her long brown coat, Brenton his deep pink hat and black jacket.

Narrator:From extraordinary places… to ordinary moments— it was always better with you.

PAGE 4

Panel 1:A hotel hallway filled with smoke. Alarm lights flash, casting an urgent, red glow. Deli, wearing her long brown coat, and Brenton, in his muted light pink hoodie and black jacket, are moving together down a smoky staircase, their expressions shifting from confusion to serious concern, reflecting real danger.

Narrator:This wasn’t a drill.

Panel 2:Deli and Brenton are in bed together, bathed in warm, soft lighting. A laptop is open, displaying a scene from 'All the Rivers Run.' They are close and relaxed, sharing a moment of reflection. Deli has her long dark hair and patterned earrings. Brenton has his short brown hair and light stubble.

Narrator:We weren’t just watching a story.

PAGE 5

Panel 1:Belgrade balcony at night. Deli and Brenton are standing side by side. We see them from behind, they are looking out at the view. Brenton's arm is around Deli's back and waist. Delis arm is around his back as well. Their heads are titled towards each other. In a loving embrace. They are relaxed. Deli wears a dark blue dress, Brenton his muted light pink hoodie. Warm ambient lighting.

Narrator:We were writing our own.

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